Oh, and another thing. The second page here? My old teachers back when I went to comic school would have told the artist that this page, and any other page like it, just doesn't work. The pacing is odd, the panels, bubbles and thought-boxes are all over the place, and the main character's face is covered by her own speech bubble in the last panel.
Damn, I want to get back to my own comic projects now.
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Date: 2011-05-14 02:03 pm (UTC)Damn, I want to get back to my own comic projects now.