Okay, what is that thing in the background of the freesia stink panel? Is it a cupboard or something? Because if so, the doors are *very* weird. It's like that optical illusion with the elephant legs. Also, Bella comes up to Edward's jutty out things. I forget what they're called. The ones that look like wings should grow on them. In the first picture, first panel, Bella's face is a tad too wide. And what's the round thing that the shiny long black thing is jutting out of in Exhibit A for Edward Cullen is Creepy? It's a bit big for a hand. Oh, and I finally figured out what was bugging me about the clenchy hand excerpt. In the first panel with Edward, his forehead is ginormous.
Other than that, the art is nice. Especially that clenching hand.
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Date: 2011-05-07 01:03 pm (UTC)In the first picture, first panel, Bella's face is a tad too wide.
And what's the round thing that the shiny long black thing is jutting out of in Exhibit A for Edward Cullen is Creepy? It's a bit big for a hand.
Oh, and I finally figured out what was bugging me about the clenchy hand excerpt. In the first panel with Edward, his forehead is ginormous.
Other than that, the art is nice. Especially that clenching hand.