Zelda...I would say this is even worse than the first chapter of My Inner Life, at least with regards to the Sue meeting the main love interest. At least Link's Queen wrote more than two paragraphs before having Link fall madly in love with her self-insert. Granted, it was still terrible and let's hope this fic never reaches the levels of mind rape MIL did, but DAMN. This is not even a case of telling and not showing--she just outright skipped the telling in regards to who this chick is and her previous interaction with Caspian! D:
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Date: 2011-04-25 03:11 am (UTC)