It gets even worse because Kayla and Heath do show up again, in a way that's supposed to make the audience believe that Zoey is hurt and upset. But it doesn't work, because the Suethors just zip through it!
"And nice little ethnic-drop into the story there, Zoey. 'Oh, I just happen to be Native American, don't you know?' and reminds you ever five minutes. I'm all for diversity in characters and do it often in my own stories, but c'mon!"
I wouldn't mind it so much if every time it came up, it didn't make her go all CHEROKEE WOMAN PRIESTESS WARRIOR.
"Anyway, I just got around to reading this spork and am loving it so far, good job! :D"
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Date: 2011-02-11 09:43 pm (UTC)"And nice little ethnic-drop into the story there, Zoey. 'Oh, I just happen to be Native American, don't you know?' and reminds you ever five minutes. I'm all for diversity in characters and do it often in my own stories, but c'mon!"
I wouldn't mind it so much if every time it came up, it didn't make her go all CHEROKEE WOMAN PRIESTESS WARRIOR.
"Anyway, I just got around to reading this spork and am loving it so far, good job! :D"
Thanks! ^^ I'm glad you like it. XD