The praise makes him "humbled". *pause* The praise makes him "humbled".
...why you stuck-up, sanctimonious, over-glorified little bastard. Do you have any idea how your attitude - yes, your attitude, not Zyn's, and I don't care who the chapter title technically refers to - is simply screaming "Beat me up, please!"? Do you? Of course you don't. You are also a near-emotionless creep. Which is even worse, in a sense, than being completely emotionless, since now we know that the things you do feel go no deeper than your skin.
Oh, and Golda? For a supposedly maternal character who raised both boys as her own children, you are being a colossal bitch, just with that one line. Zyn is displaying signs of acute depression, and that right there is your solution. Congratulations. You ought to be ashamed of yourself
"'There just isn't enough room here for both of us, and I can take care of that,' Zyn mumbled angrily to himself."
Y'know, I looked at the next chapter, and, taken separately, the above line could be interpreted as Zyn wanting to move away from the Muggle village, where his brother lives. I suppose Stouffer just forgot that little bit about destroying Rah. Because it's seriously not kosher to say that, as a consequence of sibling rivalry. (Unless the kid wants to passive-agressively demolish his brother's standing with the Muggles, which I am all for. Muaha.)
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The praise makes him "humbled".
...why you stuck-up, sanctimonious, over-glorified little bastard. Do you have any idea how your attitude - yes, your attitude, not Zyn's, and I don't care who the chapter title technically refers to - is simply screaming "Beat me up, please!"? Do you? Of course you don't. You are also a near-emotionless creep. Which is even worse, in a sense, than being completely emotionless, since now we know that the things you do feel go no deeper than your skin.
Oh, and Golda? For a supposedly maternal character who raised both boys as her own children, you are being a colossal bitch, just with that one line. Zyn is displaying signs of acute depression, and that right there is your solution. Congratulations. You ought to be ashamed of yourself
"'There just isn't enough room here for both of us, and I can take care of that,' Zyn mumbled angrily to himself."
Y'know, I looked at the next chapter, and, taken separately, the above line could be interpreted as Zyn wanting to move away from the Muggle village, where his brother lives. I suppose Stouffer just forgot that little bit about destroying Rah. Because it's seriously not kosher to say that, as a consequence of sibling rivalry. (Unless the kid wants to passive-agressively demolish his brother's standing with the Muggles, which I am all for. Muaha.)