The Realm of Literacy

Hmm...I guess this is as good time as now but I have to say this: The entire thing (so far) reads like someone reciting a dream. I'm not talking about how it's boring and everything. It just doesn't read like a story. Where is the dialogue? It's like epic telling and not showing. It's all 'Zelda said blah blah blah', etc. It feels like the Suthor telling me about the dream she had last night o.o

And that sex scene is horrible. I don't know how Guardian Song got through it.

Oh and LinkxZelda forever, bitch. :D