Well I'm going through the fanfiction that spawned it, and it's relation to Twilight is also rather remote. For instance, in the fic, Bella's false romantic lead was Peter. As in Peter, the Southern vampire friend of Jasper, who was in canon for all of five minutes. Meanwhile, Angela is a whore who tries to win Edward's affection with flirting and cookies (no, really) and Leah... yeah, told you about Leah.
The one thing I will say about not!Bella is that there is the occasional moment where she'll stand up to not!Edward, so she doesn't make me want to kill puppies as much as canon!Bella or Ana does. But still, she is a wibbling mess to the point where it's just irritating to read. The Suethor tries to explain it as a result of a history of abuse and neglect, but it still is damned annoying.
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Date: 2013-02-06 03:50 pm (UTC)The one thing I will say about not!Bella is that there is the occasional moment where she'll stand up to not!Edward, so she doesn't make me want to kill puppies as much as canon!Bella or Ana does. But still, she is a wibbling mess to the point where it's just irritating to read. The Suethor tries to explain it as a result of a history of abuse and neglect, but it still is damned annoying.
XD Thanks.