The past few months had changed me. I wasn’t as naive and heedless as I’d once been, and taking Vee along appealed to me on more than one level".
And which levels are those, exactly? I'm sure it's just bad writing, but that sentence makes me think that somehow in the last few months, Nora developed a thing for Vee. It would inject some interest into this blatantly-stolen-from-the-first-book storyline, anyway. It's like this book is a horrible mashup of the first one and New Moon.
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Date: 2012-03-16 06:56 am (UTC)And which levels are those, exactly? I'm sure it's just bad writing, but that sentence makes me think that somehow in the last few months, Nora developed a thing for Vee. It would inject some interest into this blatantly-stolen-from-the-first-book storyline, anyway. It's like this book is a horrible mashup of the first one and New Moon.