Incredibly boring prologue for something that's supposed to be 'tense.' Of course, the sporking is always great :P
This all plays out like something from a D-grade movie, where you know the guy at the beginning of the movie walking around in the middle of the night will be killed first and is asking for trouble! And who the fuck does he think he is sticking his gun in his waistband? You gangsta, Grey? :P
Fitzpatrick really does need to get out more. That and learn how to plan out things before she writes them.
Is it wrong that I laughed when I read that Harrison has a 'car gun'? What, to go with his kitchen gun and garage gun and gun in the toilet, too, just for the hell of it? :P Remember, guns don't kill people, dumbshit fictional characters with guns kill people :D
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Date: 2012-01-23 12:45 am (UTC)Incredibly boring prologue for something that's supposed to be 'tense.' Of course, the sporking is always great :P
This all plays out like something from a D-grade movie, where you know the guy at the beginning of the movie walking around in the middle of the night will be killed first and is asking for trouble! And who the fuck does he think he is sticking his gun in his waistband? You gangsta, Grey? :P
Fitzpatrick really does need to get out more. That and learn how to plan out things before she writes them.
Is it wrong that I laughed when I read that Harrison has a 'car gun'? What, to go with his kitchen gun and garage gun and gun in the toilet, too, just for the hell of it? :P Remember, guns don't kill people, dumbshit fictional characters with guns kill people :D