*reads "prologue", proceeds to take notes on how NOT to write a story*
I almost can't believe writing this bad can be published, but then again, I've suffered through "works" like Twilight and The Eye of Argon. For Pete's sake, even a dyslexic can write better than this. (No joke; my writing teacher is fully dyslexic, AND published!)
And if the Muggles descended from the "have-nots", how the blooming heck are they their ancestors?
Because clearly Ms. Stouffer doesn't know the difference between an ancestor and a descendant.
I love how she blatantly contradicts herself, apparently forgetting what she wrote just a paragraph earlier. And the redundancy! The Department of Redundancy Department must've had their hands full. Redundantly.
How in the world did you actually get through this with your brain intact? Mine hurts from this sorry excuse for a story!
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My poor brain...
Date: 2015-03-10 10:31 am (UTC)I almost can't believe writing this bad can be published, but then again, I've suffered through "works" like Twilight and The Eye of Argon. For Pete's sake, even a dyslexic can write better than this. (No joke; my writing teacher is fully dyslexic, AND published!)
And if the Muggles descended from the "have-nots", how the blooming heck are they their ancestors?
Because clearly Ms. Stouffer doesn't know the difference between an ancestor and a descendant.
I love how she blatantly contradicts herself, apparently forgetting what she wrote just a paragraph earlier. And the redundancy! The Department of Redundancy Department must've had their hands full. Redundantly.
How in the world did you actually get through this with your brain intact? Mine hurts from this sorry excuse for a story!