Yeah, I have no idea how she thought any of this would have jibed with her target audience like, at all. The original story was fairly ridiculous and not child-friendly, but this prologue is just horrific. Maybe she and Fitzpatrick had the same horrific/bored editor.
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Date: 2011-12-26 02:04 am (UTC)