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Date: 2011-11-07 01:35 pm (UTC)
So... the point of this chapter was???

Seriously, what happened? Nothing progressed the plot much, everything was even more contrived than usual, and Nora losing what few brain cells she had left.

So, what happens now with Elliot? Fitzpatrick had so much build-up about him being a psycho killer, with the news article Nora found, Elliot coming to her house to threaten her and leading Vee to the school, yet it gets swept aside at the last minute for some arse pull out of nowhere that makes no sense at all! You can't just name Jules as the real culprit and expect us to believe it with no real hints whatsoever! You're supposed to drop those hints subtly throughout the story which become more resounding towards the end! Here, Fitzpatrick was twirling her moustache and thought to herself 'they'll never see this one coming!' Yeah, we didnt - because it comes out of nowhere with no inkling of it at all.

Oh, word to Aikaterini as well :P Yeah, that 'dusky' line made me cringe, too.I can't believe all these Suethors actually buy into these stereotypes.
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