Erin bursts out crying and declares that if Zoey never feels better, she will never feel better
It’s nice to know Zoey’s friends live their lives vicariously through Zoey’s. It’s not like they should think or feel anything for themselves!
~~~
So nice to know that Stevie Rae had so little characterization that there's nothing to remember her by but her stereotypes.
IF any of these people dropped dead would their be anything to remember but their sterotypes? Have any of them contributed anything to the plot (for lack of a better word) ?
~~~
You know they don't hold funerals, seeing as they ignored the deaths of Elizabeth and Elliot in the last book.
BUT ZELDAQUEEN THEY WHERE ICKY AND TOTALLY NOT ZOEY’S BEST BFF SUE BUDDY SO THEY DIDN’T DESERVE IT LIKE - um - uh - that girl we’re mourning right now…
~~~
Doesn't anyone hear about Nyx but say "That's nice, but I still am a devoted [insert religion here]" or "I get what you believe, but I still believe blah, blah, blah".
But ZeldaQueen, NYX is REAL and everyone knows that only idiots would agree with the mary sue!
I mean… oh skip the sarcasm - that is was I mean!
~~~
Christ, what is up with everyone magically knowing that something happened to Zoey so they can run and hold her hand?
Nyx is an awfully devoted goddess - devoted to the sue at least! I’m surprised she hasn’t just declared Zoey the new goddess - I mean it’s not like Zoey is expected to be (or capable of being) humble!
~~~
Just thought I'd remind you that Erik does, in fact, exist. Zoey seems to have forgotten about him.
Come on Erik - there is still time to leave her before you are derailed! She’s cheatin’ on you man (of course she IS justified because - um - she’s female and when girls/women cheat it’s a-okay because it’s the guys fault - or she forgot the other guy existed - which is of course somehow his fault… Unless that girl/woman is someone Zoey doesn’t like…in which case she‘s a whore)
~~~
I really cannot wait for Erik to break up with her in the next book.
You forget it’s because he’s a jerk and not because she’s a cheating bitch you should be pushed off a cliff for emotionally manipulating men and acting like some innocent woobie when she is in fact one of the most shallow selfish bitches every to unintentional grace a book with her presence.
~~~
"What the hell. It felt as if my life was unraveling like the hem of an old skirt. I didn't want to tell Heath no, and worrying about our Imprint was just one thing too many to worry about right now"
Do you EVER worry - ABOUT ANYTHING!?
~~~
There's also a jab at the fact that Erin and Shaunee are probably not virgins, which they are not bothered by and which I honestly do not care at all about. Zoey does though, because she makes a mental note to ask them questions later.
Because it’s her business as GRAND-SUE!
You know the whole conservative about sex thing could have been good characterization about Zoey and the way she was raised, but instead it comes off as preachy, obnoxious, and frankly hypocrite giving her stringing guys along, being ashamed that her boyfriend (whom she treat terribly) may have been raped by Aphrodite, doesn’t mind having an immoral affair with her teacher, gets off on drinking her human boyfriend’s blood, and comes off as a creepy sociopath.
It’s like someone who works as the most popular whore in a brothel telling the village “good time girl” she a bad person because she just wants to have fun and isn’t charging money! Zoey is by far one of the my hypocritical people I have ever seen in a book who is unintentionally that way! I do wonder if her and Bella are related because one can draw a lot of comparisons between them…
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Date: 2011-08-03 03:31 am (UTC)It’s nice to know Zoey’s friends live their lives vicariously through Zoey’s. It’s not like they should think or feel anything for themselves!
~~~
So nice to know that Stevie Rae had so little characterization that there's nothing to remember her by but her stereotypes.
IF any of these people dropped dead would their be anything to remember but their sterotypes? Have any of them contributed anything to the plot (for lack of a better word) ?
~~~
You know they don't hold funerals, seeing as they ignored the deaths of Elizabeth and Elliot in the last book.
BUT ZELDAQUEEN THEY WHERE ICKY AND TOTALLY NOT ZOEY’S BEST BFF SUE BUDDY SO THEY DIDN’T DESERVE IT LIKE - um - uh - that girl we’re mourning right now…
~~~
Doesn't anyone hear about Nyx but say "That's nice, but I still am a devoted [insert religion here]" or "I get what you believe, but I still believe blah, blah, blah".
But ZeldaQueen, NYX is REAL and everyone knows that only idiots would agree with the mary sue!
I mean… oh skip the sarcasm - that is was I mean!
~~~
Christ, what is up with everyone magically knowing that something happened to Zoey so they can run and hold her hand?
Nyx is an awfully devoted goddess - devoted to the sue at least! I’m surprised she hasn’t just declared Zoey the new goddess - I mean it’s not like Zoey is expected to be (or capable of being) humble!
~~~
Just thought I'd remind you that Erik does, in fact, exist. Zoey seems to have forgotten about him.
Come on Erik - there is still time to leave her before you are derailed! She’s cheatin’ on you man (of course she IS justified because - um - she’s female and when girls/women cheat it’s a-okay because it’s the guys fault - or she forgot the other guy existed - which is of course somehow his fault… Unless that girl/woman is someone Zoey doesn’t like…in which case she‘s a whore)
~~~
I really cannot wait for Erik to break up with her in the next book.
You forget it’s because he’s a jerk and not because she’s a cheating bitch you should be pushed off a cliff for emotionally manipulating men and acting like some innocent woobie when she is in fact one of the most shallow selfish bitches every to unintentional grace a book with her presence.
~~~
"What the hell. It felt as if my life was unraveling like the hem of an old skirt. I didn't want to tell Heath no, and worrying about our Imprint was just one thing too many to worry about right now"
Do you EVER worry - ABOUT ANYTHING!?
~~~
There's also a jab at the fact that Erin and Shaunee are probably not virgins, which they are not bothered by and which I honestly do not care at all about. Zoey does though, because she makes a mental note to ask them questions later.
Because it’s her business as GRAND-SUE!
You know the whole conservative about sex thing could have been good characterization about Zoey and the way she was raised, but instead it comes off as preachy, obnoxious, and frankly hypocrite giving her stringing guys along, being ashamed that her boyfriend (whom she treat terribly) may have been raped by Aphrodite, doesn’t mind having an immoral affair with her teacher, gets off on drinking her human boyfriend’s blood, and comes off as a creepy sociopath.
It’s like someone who works as the most popular whore in a brothel telling the village “good time girl” she a bad person because she just wants to have fun and isn’t charging money! Zoey is by far one of the my hypocritical people I have ever seen in a book who is unintentionally that way!
I do wonder if her and Bella are related because one can draw a lot of comparisons between them…
~~~
On a side note - Poor Erik...