Wow, a creepy scene. That happens in a restaurant with the helpless girl being interrogated and, dare I say, 'dazzled.' Sound familiar? :P
Oh, and to add to the Twilight-copypasta I noticed: He softly shook his head. 'Interested? We're talking about you. I'm fascinated.' He smiled, and it was a fantastic smile. The effect was a ratcheted pulse-my ratcheted pulse.
'My stomach was full - of butterflies,' anyone? :P
Vee leaves to go deal with her period (because yeah, I really wanted to know about that) and...Patch shows up. *rolls eyes* Yeah, who didn't see this one coming?
So, do people usually just announce that kinda stuff (your period) at the table all the time in America? Can't say that's a tradition we have in Australia :P
God, just when I think this story can't get any creepier, Patch justifies to me even more why he should be on Cops being tasered by a 6 foot 6 policeman for millions of viewers to see :P Plus, Patch keeps putting that song in my head: 'I always feel like/somebody's waaaaatching me!' XD
And I don't know if anyone else has noticed this, but since Patch is supposed to be the 'bad boy' and ~Italian~ in this story, but it kinda reminds me of the stereotypical stories of old (like in old Harlequin novels) where the ethnic bad boy is always 'bad news' and doesn't play by the rules. Now, considering if Patch is supposed to fit the whole 'dark and swarthy' mould , wear a leather jacket and hang around in 'ghetto' areas, then that could lead to some pretty Unfortunate Ethnic Implications. Which kinda irritates me, because, of course all ethnics must be involved with crime somehow >.<
I don't know if that's just me, but in some books whoever is ethnic in a story is either seen as 'exotic' or 'shady' somehow (like Twilight, the Native American wolves are seen both literally and figuratively living like 'animals').
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Date: 2011-06-11 10:11 am (UTC)Oh, and to add to the Twilight-copypasta I noticed: He softly shook his head. 'Interested? We're talking about you. I'm fascinated.' He smiled, and it was a fantastic smile. The effect was a ratcheted pulse-my ratcheted pulse.
'My stomach was full - of butterflies,' anyone? :P
Vee leaves to go deal with her period (because yeah, I really wanted to know about that) and...Patch shows up. *rolls eyes* Yeah, who didn't see this one coming?
So, do people usually just announce that kinda stuff (your period) at the table all the time in America? Can't say that's a tradition we have in Australia :P
God, just when I think this story can't get any creepier, Patch justifies to me even more why he should be on Cops being tasered by a 6 foot 6 policeman for millions of viewers to see :P Plus, Patch keeps putting that song in my head: 'I always feel like/somebody's waaaaatching me!' XD
And I don't know if anyone else has noticed this, but since Patch is supposed to be the 'bad boy' and ~Italian~ in this story, but it kinda reminds me of the stereotypical stories of old (like in old Harlequin novels) where the ethnic bad boy is always 'bad news' and doesn't play by the rules. Now, considering if Patch is supposed to fit the whole 'dark and swarthy' mould , wear a leather jacket and hang around in 'ghetto' areas, then that could lead to some pretty Unfortunate Ethnic Implications. Which kinda irritates me, because, of course all ethnics must be involved with crime somehow >.<
I don't know if that's just me, but in some books whoever is ethnic in a story is either seen as 'exotic' or 'shady' somehow (like Twilight, the Native American wolves are seen both literally and figuratively living like 'animals').