http://madamchaos.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] madamchaos.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zelda_queen 2010-11-16 11:36 pm (UTC)

I have to admit to being highly amused by this just because the author has no capacity for showing instead of telling.

"And everybody was shocked. Then they got over their shock. Then Ranglock read something else and everybody was shocked."

And that's... about the only amusing thing here. God damn, this is just boring. At least the chapters are really short, but... but wow.

I guess the author thought that the inheritance rituals were just SO EXCITING she couldn't possibly put them all in one chapter without BLOWING YOUR MIND (or maybe realized that putting them all together would create a singularity of supreme boredom and decided to try and save the universe...).

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