Woooow, this girl's a whiner. And...she seriously wrote a fic based on something she only saw TRAILERS for? Sheesh, if she didn't want to see the play, even a quick reading of the Wikipedia summary might have helped!

Also, how the heck is her story DARK if all the things she CLAIMS make it dark (miscarriage, affairs, near-death experience) are just handwaved away and forgotten or forgiven instantly? Show us some real consequences for these things, then we'll see how dark it is and say "you're so mean to your OC."