Just had a thought: wouldn't it be a greater story to read about a girl who has visions that no one believes are real and just her trying to get attention, until shit really starts going down because they ignored her, rather than a vapid story about some idiot and her stupid friends who put their dumbarse interests like 'hawt' guys and Count Chocula before real stuff like, I don't know, PEOPLE'S LIVES, and abuse their positions within the school?

Another thought: This is a vampire story, right? I keep forgetting, because we hardly hear anything about vampires doing vampire things and whatnot. I feel like this is some sort of mythology story. My point is don't call it a vampire story if the vampires barely feature in it at all! :P