This...is the biggest clusterfuck of a climax I have ever seen. What the hell just happened?! Characters materializing out of nowhere, deus ex machina being thrown around like free beer at a frat party, more Mary Sue traits in one chapter than most fanfics have in several, and a potentially lethal situation beginning and magically ending with no repercussions or difficulties in the span of a few pages.

THAT. WAS. AWFUL.