*gigglesnorts at Beastly reference* Yeah that was just...bad.
Ranted on my LJ about it already though, so I'll spare your ear.

Seriously, there's two chapters left of this tripe and only now is there any sort of real conflict or anything? Ugh, I'm just gonna channel the Nostalgia Critic and say "JUST BECAUSE YOU END ON A CLIFFHANGER DOESN'T GUARANTEE A SEQUEL."
And...wow, Heath just randomly shows up at the gazebo at four in the morning? I imagine he walks around the whole town all night long, going "Zo-eeeeeeey~" and hoping she'll answer.