I know that in first person it's really hard to fit a description of your character in naturally, but I'm getting really tired of this whole 'looking in the mirror to describe myself' thing. I guess it makes sense that Zoey'd want to go check out the Mark, but still that reads less as 'AH I HAVE A HUGE VAMPYRE TATTOO ON MY FOREHEAD' and more like the author wanting to drop a physical description.