Cedric's death in this chapter is like the Suethor suddenly realized, "Wait--Cedric died in the graveyard, but I made him live to let Holly look awesome. But I don't have enough creativity to incorporate him into canon, so he needs to die anyway." His death in this story feels as senseless and as pointless as Irina's in Breaking Dawn.

Not sure who had the worse rewrite of the Voldemort/Harry Duel. Rose or Holly. It is definitely a mystery...