ext_174200 ([identity profile] detritius.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zelda_queen 2010-12-13 02:14 am (UTC)

I shook my head. “No, accepting those things is what you want from me. Don’t you want to know what I want from you?”
Will lowered his sword and turned his head away. I had gotten to him.

“What do you want from me, Jack?” he sighed in submission.


If I didn't know better, I would have thought I had stumbled into a slash fic. Or not, since Jack is pretty much indistinguishable from a teenage girl, as written. Somehow, I don't think any of that is what the Suethor was going for.

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