I have to applaud you. I stopped reading the actual fic around the time I got to Holly's self-aggrandizing about getting so many dates (and kind of threw up in my mouth that was disgusting). Getting through the rest of that was truly a feat.

I mean wow. Even Rose Potter didn't disgust me this much (maybe because Rose Potter's actual writing was bad enough to be amusing; Holly's actual writing is so mediocre that the content shines through with the full force of its OOC horror). I mean wow, that was just... there are no words.

*salutes*