http://beacon80.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] beacon80.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zelda_queen 2012-05-21 11:51 pm (UTC)

Two smaller things I forgot:

1) Ron's infatuation with Holly serves no purpose other than to reinforce that every single male character will fall for her.

2) The tunnels she finds are absolutely pointless. Don't introduce plot elements that you're not going to use!

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