I don't know - My Immortal seemed so bad it must have been on purpose. This is just sad, scary, and bordering on deeply unhinged if the author really dreamed it even in a lucid dream.
I try to over look typos, spelling mistakes, and grammar to some extent due to all the errors I make, but this fanfics typos and mistakes when combined with the already twisted plot - um or whatever that it, I mean I really don't see the "plot" of this thing. Is just... it's an unstory!
It's just like Twilight! The "plot" if any has no conflict, no meaning, and exists only to move the characters to a point A to a point B without any sense of drama, wit, or human epathy all well telling you how wonderful the characters love is. It's like it was writtern by a computer AI programed to act like a crazy fangirl*!
Although if it is Meyer's then I dare to say she has actually gotten less shallow!
If it's the writer of My Immortal then I'm happy for her head injury - it made her more entertaining even if in a twisted way...
*That's it! AI is programmed to be a Fangirl, unsure of that that is it searches the internet! Still unable to properly understand human emotion it finds fangirls write fanfiction so it does to! Believe all fangirls act the way the crazy ones do it acts the same way! It either stopped because it was improved... or was put out of its misery...
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I try to over look typos, spelling mistakes, and grammar to some extent due to all the errors I make, but this fanfics typos and mistakes when combined with the already twisted plot - um or whatever that it, I mean I really don't see the "plot" of this thing. Is just... it's an unstory!
It's just like Twilight! The "plot" if any has no conflict, no meaning, and exists only to move the characters to a point A to a point B without any sense of drama, wit, or human epathy all well telling you how wonderful the characters love is. It's like it was writtern by a computer AI programed to act like a crazy fangirl*!
Although if it is Meyer's then I dare to say she has actually gotten less shallow!
If it's the writer of My Immortal then I'm happy for her head injury - it made her more entertaining even if in a twisted way...
*That's it! AI is programmed to be a Fangirl, unsure of that that is it searches the internet! Still unable to properly understand human emotion it finds fangirls write fanfiction so it does to! Believe all fangirls act the way the crazy ones do it acts the same way! It either stopped because it was improved... or was put out of its misery...