Hello! I know this is an old MST, but I just wanted to comment. You know, you forgot to add at the end that Jenna-Sue fell asleep in a hot tub; that part just made me scratch my head. I mean, wouldn't that mean she would drown? Also, who the heck f***s in a hot tub?! Btw, am I the only person who thinks that sucking on the same things that men urinate out of is extremely gross? (Though it's nothing compared to anal; seriously, doesn't anyone get infected from that?!) But seriously, Link may not have a character, but I believe there's a point where it would be illogical for him to behave a certain way. I personally headcanon that Ocarina Link, immediately after being transported beck to the child timeline, was kind of a Creepy Child in a way. After a while, by the time he turns 16 again, he has the about the mental age of a 30-year-old. Oh yeah, and you also forgot that; "Adult" Link, even if his mental age magically matured with him, is still physically 16. And Jenna is at least 20. I don't know how creepy that actually is, but I find it kind of gross. I might want to put this on my hitlist. It's pretty spectacular. Btw, I imagine Link would be covered in all kinds of battle scars. But here? Nope! He shouldn't have such imperfections! Then again, all fanart for anything has characters like that, so I guess I shouldn't pay that against this fic.
Erika of AWBfA!
Btw, am I the only person who thinks that sucking on the same things that men urinate out of is extremely gross? (Though it's nothing compared to anal; seriously, doesn't anyone get infected from that?!)
But seriously, Link may not have a character, but I believe there's a point where it would be illogical for him to behave a certain way. I personally headcanon that Ocarina Link, immediately after being transported beck to the child timeline, was kind of a Creepy Child in a way. After a while, by the time he turns 16 again, he has the about the mental age of a 30-year-old. Oh yeah, and you also forgot that; "Adult" Link, even if his mental age magically matured with him, is still physically 16. And Jenna is at least 20. I don't know how creepy that actually is, but I find it kind of gross.
I might want to put this on my hitlist. It's pretty spectacular. Btw, I imagine Link would be covered in all kinds of battle scars. But here? Nope! He shouldn't have such imperfections! Then again, all fanart for anything has characters like that, so I guess I shouldn't pay that against this fic.