Wow, Shannon is Zoey Redbird. Why do she have friends if she'll gonna drop them like hot potatoes the moment she enters magic land? The main character in a book I was writing was also transported to a magical world, and she tried to find a way back home because she had friends. Here though, our charming heroine says 'screw my friends, they'll waste away from cancer for being airheads'.
And naked, fiery version of herself transporting Shannon, huh? I can think of...less interesting ways of getting to a magical land. I like to think Shannon died when she took her eyes off the road to look at the Death Pot, and the fire her represents a car crashing into her.
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And naked, fiery version of herself transporting Shannon, huh? I can think of...less interesting ways of getting to a magical land. I like to think Shannon died when she took her eyes off the road to look at the Death Pot, and the fire her represents a car crashing into her.