You know, I have at least three or four pool game apps on my iPod. I also used to be obsessed with playing it when I was little on Nintendo. Didn't realise it was gonna make me a thug :P
Oh my God, the incessant whining in this chapter huuuuuuuurt! . God, you'd think Nora believes she should be canonised for her great paaaaaain at being dumped her psychotic boyfriend. Sorry, hun, no arsehole pass for you >.<
I didn't realise Marcie actually had her way with Nora! :O No wonder she's bitter… :P Editing is supposed to be a writer's best friend, Fitzpatrick!
The description of Scott in this chapter just made me roll my eyes, it sounds like something out of a D-grade teen movie from the early 00's. These so-called YA Lit writers really need to start finding some new inspiration that isn't painfully outdated…
I loved Mrs Parnell! I'm surprised she didn't start screaming 'Will somebody please think of the children!' in the middle of dinner :P She's like the perfect Strawman Moral Guardian and I love those kinds of stories where moral guardians try to repress and censor everything around them and everyone tries to rebel against them. Mrs Parnell is probably the type who still believes rock and roll is the 'devil's' music and all teenagers are nothing but rampantly hormonal sluts.
It only goes to show just how sheltered and repressed Fitzpatrick truly is, which is especially sad being a grown woman and mother and all. That and the fact that she managed to write some truly horrifying scenes that alluded to rape and mental torture and stalking in the last book *shudder* But since she couldn't pick up on any of that then, maybe she really is just too ignorantly stupid to notice.
Oh, and thanks for putting the words 'heavenly, bad-boy wiener' in my head *groans*
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Oh my God, the incessant whining in this chapter huuuuuuuurt! . God, you'd think Nora believes she should be canonised for her great paaaaaain at being dumped her psychotic boyfriend. Sorry, hun, no arsehole pass for you >.<
I didn't realise Marcie actually had her way with Nora! :O No wonder she's bitter… :P
Editing is supposed to be a writer's best friend, Fitzpatrick!
The description of Scott in this chapter just made me roll my eyes, it sounds like something out of a D-grade teen movie from the early 00's. These so-called YA Lit writers really need to start finding some new inspiration that isn't painfully outdated…
I loved Mrs Parnell! I'm surprised she didn't start screaming 'Will somebody please think of the children!' in the middle of dinner :P She's like the perfect Strawman Moral Guardian and I love those kinds of stories where moral guardians try to repress and censor everything around them and everyone tries to rebel against them. Mrs Parnell is probably the type who still believes rock and roll is the 'devil's' music and all teenagers are nothing but rampantly hormonal sluts.
It only goes to show just how sheltered and repressed Fitzpatrick truly is, which is especially sad being a grown woman and mother and all. That and the fact that she managed to write some truly horrifying scenes that alluded to rape and mental torture and stalking in the last book *shudder* But since she couldn't pick up on any of that then, maybe she really is just too ignorantly stupid to notice.
Oh, and thanks for putting the words 'heavenly, bad-boy wiener' in my head *groans*