Then what do you call that bit where Elliot was going all "Come camping with us, Nora, OR ELSE"? 'Cause honestly, that bit was as creepy as all the Patch stuff to me. Probably because I was wondering how the hell this poor girl got so many rapists after her.
Seriously, when you have to go THIS creepy to make your protagonist look good by comparison, you're doing it wrong.
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Then what do you call that bit where Elliot was going all "Come camping with us, Nora, OR ELSE"? 'Cause honestly, that bit was as creepy as all the Patch stuff to me. Probably because I was wondering how the hell this poor girl got so many rapists after her.
Seriously, when you have to go THIS creepy to make your protagonist look good by comparison, you're doing it wrong.