http://greenerygripes.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] greenerygripes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zelda_queen 2011-07-28 12:45 am (UTC)

Mostly they're all worried about her, which leads to them summoning their elements in an overblown and overly sappy way, using dialogue which sounds nothing like the way they talk for most of the book.
So, rather than being upset themselves, they're all focusing on the pwecious widdle feefees of Mary-Sue--er, Zoey?
>C Grrr.

Neferet also gives them a vial of liquid, which she tells them to give to Zoey so that she will "sleep without nightmares".
My first thought was "Have an apple, my pretty!" I am so sorry.

Weren't fledglings supposed to just ignore deaths and get on with it? That's what they did for Elliot and Elizabeth, after all. What makes Stevie Rae so special?
The Cast ladies like her, is what. >< Gaaaah!

Dear lord, this chapter was awful...
And again, WHY ISN'T THE BOOK ABOUT APHRODITE?

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