/And poor Zyn? This is his entire entry. "ZYN, twin brother of Rah, leader of the Nevils, insecure and jealous of his brother, he leave Aura for Dezra (see Rah)" What the hell? She doesn't even give a physical description of how screwed up he was! Is he so uncharacterized as a person that he can only be defined by the Almighty Rah?/
Here's what I think the entry for Zyn should have been:
"Zyn: twin brother of Rah, leader of the Nevils. Pale skin, green eyes, formerly muscular, underweight because of severe depression and malnutrition brought on by years of neglect by Rah and the Muggles, hair that was originally reddish-grey ("rusty metal") but then magically and inexplicably turned strawberry-blonde. Frustrated, unhappy, depressed, angry, isolated, prone to lashing out, unfairly neglected and ignored by the Muggles, is the only active and ambitious person around. Is in desperate need of a better story, better characterization, and a hug."
As a last-minute sidenote, whatever happened to the worry stone? It was supposed to remind Zyn that he was still loved, but he only took one glance at it by the end and then that was it. Whatever happened to that storyline?
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Here's what I think the entry for Zyn should have been:
"Zyn: twin brother of Rah, leader of the Nevils. Pale skin, green eyes, formerly muscular, underweight because of severe depression and malnutrition brought on by years of neglect by Rah and the Muggles, hair that was originally reddish-grey ("rusty metal") but then magically and inexplicably turned strawberry-blonde. Frustrated, unhappy, depressed, angry, isolated, prone to lashing out, unfairly neglected and ignored by the Muggles, is the only active and ambitious person around. Is in desperate need of a better story, better characterization, and a hug."
As a last-minute sidenote, whatever happened to the worry stone? It was supposed to remind Zyn that he was still loved, but he only took one glance at it by the end and then that was it. Whatever happened to that storyline?